Where to start, where to start....
Castro didn't lead the MLB in hits. He was 4th. Do your research.
We lost 28 games by 1 run.
Errors aren't exactly a good way to judge fielding.
It's Aramis RamireZ not Ramires. Also, did you mean offense? You put off season.
Also, your last sentence is horribly placed. If you put that in the paragraph before, that makes your conclusion pretty good.