12that 3cause you fools are more interested in judging grammar than talking about the 4bears.5By the way this is old news6 every year the 7bears say 8no to hard knocks9 10its not breaking news or anything.
1. 'That' should be capitalized.
2. What you're trying to say is
That is, which can also be contracted into
That's.
3. You are, or you're, giving a reason for something. Therefore, the word you are, or you're, looking for is:
because.
4. When discussing the Bears you are referring to a
proper noun. Therefore, the first letter should be capitalized.
5. Traditionally, you want to have
two spaces after a period. Like this. There are times, however, you can get away with one space.
6. I get confused, but there definitely needs to be a punctuation of some type here. Whether it is a comma, colon, or semi-colon, I am unsure.
7. Again, a proper noun.
8. 'no' should probably be in quotations.
9. Proper noun again.
10. I'd also end the sentence there; maybe even end the post at this point. To say, 'this isn't breaking news or anything,' is fairly redundant since you've already claimed in the same sentence they turn down the show ever year.
Have a good rest of your weekend!
