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Gator29

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Hi everyone,
I want to improve my English skills. I will be working hard to edit my English before I post. I want to become a professional poster with proper grammar, and spelling. I would like the help to improve my English.
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I'll help you out when I can.

You need the word "to" in a few parts of what you just said.

You said "I want improve my English skills." It should say "I want to improve my English skills."

Same goes for "I want become professional poster". "I want to become a professional poster".

Most of what you say is kind of coherent, you're just missing some prepositions, articles, etc.

Before you post, even though this sounds stupid, read out loud what you're about to post. If it doesn't really make sense coming out of your mouth, then it probably needs revision. For example, saying "I want improve my English skills" doesn't sound right at all when you say it out loud. I want to improve, I want to jump, I want to type. Not I want improve, I want jump, or I want type.

Hopefully this small lesson will help you out a bit.
 

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I'll help you out when I can.

You need the word "to" in a few parts of what you just said.

You said "I want improve my English skills." It should say "I want to improve my English skills."

Same goes for "I want become professional poster". "I want to become a professional poster".

Most of what you say is kind of coherent, you're just missing some prepositions, articles, etc.

Before you post, even though this sounds stupid, read out loud what you're about to post. If it doesn't really make sense coming out of your mouth, then it probably needs revision. For example, saying "I want improve my English skills" doesn't sound right at all when you say it out loud. I want to improve, I want to jump, I want to type. Not I want improve, I want jump, or I want type.

Hopefully this small lesson will help you out a bit.

Thank You HighJump31 for your mini lesson. I agree that I should read a loud to see the prepostions, and articles.
 

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I can appreciate the desire to improve your grammer. When I do write in a serious manner, I'm the type to obssess over making it quite perfect. When you write Gator, I haven't had any issues personally. The only real issues to improve your writing is as Highjump pointed out, and saying it out loud before posting is a good idea. But like I stated before Bro, the more you write, the more you'll improve. And from here on out, I'll point out any grammer flaws when you write if no one else does.
 

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Thank You HighJump31 for your mini lesson. I agree that I should read out loud to see the prepostions, and articles.
Fixed :) Though it can be debated about changing see to hear. But I see no true issue with either word.
 

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i read the title of this thread as "my engrish"

lollers

seriously though yeah gator its really not all that bad. you spell shit correctly at least.
 

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Just don't come 'round here talking no foreign, ******y shit.
 

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