Sox beat Pirates (article)

Lefty

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Dude, calm down and maybe take a deep breath before writing a piece like this. I know you want to get the game re-cap out as quickly as you can, but blasting through a piece paying mere lip-service to things like punctuation, grammar and sentence structure is also not the best idea.

Just giving your article a cursory glance reveals that you just blazed through writing it and probably didn't even bother to re-read it before posting. Just calm down next time and work through it slowly.
 

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