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:bigfinger:hi phil rogers!
just playin. it is fine.
It's actually pretty good
Btw...I wrote this while in class![]()
Great article. I really like how you sourced your info. That's a huge plus imo! Your report on the content is great, the only concern I have is while Morin may replace Skille as you said, I don't think that'd be good for him. If he's going to be on the NHL roster, I think he needs to be a top six guy. Skille has been fumbled and bumbled with, but generally has been a bottom six guy.
Grammar wise, personally, I've always hated the popular usage of the word "shore" - It's just me being an English guy...it's wrong imho....also in that same sentence you're missing the L in "while." (and fixed!)