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You got it.
You're 14? For realz?
You got it.
You're 14? For realz?
Lol. Yeah.
What sportswriters do you read?
Michael Wilbon is my favorite, personally. I occassionally look at some stuff online. Zack and Jimmy Mac I followed on Bleacher Report.
Like I said, I know I need to spend more work on my stuff. I usually do, I've just been tryin' to get quick things out. I'm more of an opinion writer for now, 'cause it can be more controversial.
There's your issue.
Don't start off doing that. Start off as a reporter. Doing game recaps etc. Lots of reasons for that but the main few revolve around it allowing you to really watch the game and learn to understand it up close....rather than being the lawyer equivalent of an ambulance chaser.
Also, going for "opinion" because it can be controversial is basically setting yourself up to be a story whore and turning into Skip Bayless and Jay Mariotti, two of the least respected people in the industry. Most times though they stir "controversy" their writing is incredible subpar, non-factual, and borderline immoral.
Basically work on being a reporter first....understand what you are writing about fully before you jump into making "controversial" article because if you don't know your stuff and sport really well your writing will come off as juvenile..no matter how old or young you are. I spent 7 years doing stats and radio play by play and color commentary before I started my talk radio show. Have to crawl before you can walk and walk before you can run etc etc.
The problem is that it's not well informed or educated....which is why until you get older and get more experienced I'd stick to straight reporting etc.I hate Skip Bayless. I see your point, but I voice what I see and my honest opinion
Why is it that the players who have a right to be compared to fellow colleagues aren't?
Brett Favre, whom I'm not fond of, is in a vision inside my head that includes him being compared to Jay Cutler.
Both gunslingers are NFC North division rivals and under the helm of a former smashmouth squad.
Both quarterbacks have a gunslinging ambition and throw many picks...at points.
Both commanders under center have faced adversity with the media.
Favre with his on-and-off retirement, Cutler with his "uncoachable" ego.
LeBron can be compared to Jordan, who which nobody will ever be as good as, but these couple aren't compared?
It Seems a little weird to me.(space)Usually the media would pounce all over this, since, y'know; Brett Favre is a God in their eyes.
I apologize for being a bit sour towards Brett Favre. He does have monster stats and is a future Hall of Famer, I'll give him that.
The thing I don't like about him is he knows that the team he plays for rides of dies off him.
Not to pile on to you Dustin, but here, take a look at the 643 Sports archives on Bleacher Report: Article Archives - Bleacher Report
You don't have to read ALL of the articles, just start at the bottom (the first ones written for the account) and work your way up, scanning or reading intently at your leisure. I think you will find a definite progression in my writing style from the academic-esque "cover everything and every possible angle" to a simpler version of "thesis-support-conclusion", yet IMO the simpler, shorter pieces are more decisive and thought provoking than the earlier essays.
And just a clarification, the pieces to read are the ones signed "JP", as FedEx also writes for the account but has had training and sufficient practice in the writing field, so there is no real progression to see, he already is where he needs to be in terms of writing style.
I don't think that's necessarily true. You're just as good of a writer as me, if not better. We're both guilty I think of spending TOO much time trying to get a point across and writing 9,000 word epics which get tremendously boring and bland.
I don't think that's necessarily true. You're just as good of a writer as me, if not better. We're both guilty I think of spending TOO much time trying to get a point across and writing 9,000 word epics which get tremendously boring and bland.
Media Adversity: Why Isn't Jay Cutler Compared To Brett Favre? | Bleacher Report
I know Lefty and FirstTimer will criticize me for this, as well others, but I felt it was appropriate. Enjoy.![]()
Cutler with his "uncoachable" ego.
You missed on this one, Jay has been very "coachable" under Martz.
Outside of that, I enjoyed your article.
Biz
I try to make mine short, but not just really short. Y'know? More people would wanna read something shorter.
Plus, the 1-2 sentence paragraphs seem more appealing...but maybe that's me. And the editors do that sometimes.
I try to make mine short, but not just really short. Y'know? More people would wanna read something shorter.
Plus, the 1-2 sentence paragraphs seem more appealing...but maybe that's me. And the editors do that sometimes.